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Baby cries for the mommy
Boy cries for the attention
Teen cries for the confusion
Man cries for the reality
Senior cries for the regret
Deceased cries for the living
No matter who we are
Powerful or weak
Happy or depressed
Rich or poor
Popular or alone
We all weep together
One way or another
Boy cries for the attention
Teen cries for the confusion
Man cries for the reality
Senior cries for the regret
Deceased cries for the living
No matter who we are
Powerful or weak
Happy or depressed
Rich or poor
Popular or alone
We all weep together
One way or another
Literature
A message to the broken
You drown yourself
in liquid sorrows,
letting the salty mess
burn your wounds,
and the sadness
to drip in your mouth,
consuming your words
and you say
you deserve the pain,
but I want to dry your face,
and whisper in your ear
how the clouds cry too,
while they hold such beauty,
and so do you.
Literature
It's okay to be imperfect
The moon
has craters
too,
and look
how bright
it shines,
even in
the darkest
of times.
Literature
I love... and hate being a writer
I hate being a writer
yet I love it too
though such ambiguous feelings
cannot be explained so simply...
I loathe the unsterilized ink
which continually poisons my veins
and pumps from an all too emotional heart
yet when this ink is set free
breathed from my syringe of a quill
I'm assailed by such a breathtaking sense
of relief and release that I forget
and become intoxicated on my own vile.
I abhor my blank eyes
which so incoherently delude me
as to what is real
that I am faced continually
with the realization that reality
will never be enough for me
and yet these blank eyes are the same
on which I paint such beautiful fantasies
and exper
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This is a poem that came out of the top of my head late at night! Seems like the nighttime helps me write better or something who knows ! As always thank you for your time in viewing what I have to offer to the community! (Also!) Trying something new and asking for a critique (critique ) on this one o.o ... I would like to know what you think of the subject matter, If I capture what the title is going for, do I convey a meaning of how people can relate to one another through the expression of sorrow? Any other comments are welcomed if you want!
Edit-- I am surprised!!! I never thought this would get anywhere that it is now! But I want to thank you guys! As much as this achievement belongs to me it also belongs to you! Because I am just a random poet guy who wants to show his literature around so I thank you guys more than anything and I am truly grateful to be on the dA 24 hour popular tag along with you guys!
Ill get around to thanking you all when I get back on when I wake up!
Edit 2-- So... Saying thank you to each of you individually is taking a while ;w; even though I want to say it to everyone... Hmmm... I suppose I can say it here though! I know it isn't as personal but I want to thank each and everyone of you for the fav's and watches it really touches my heart! Sorry its not an individual thank you but at least it is the next best thing! ^_^
Edit-- I am surprised!!! I never thought this would get anywhere that it is now! But I want to thank you guys! As much as this achievement belongs to me it also belongs to you! Because I am just a random poet guy who wants to show his literature around so I thank you guys more than anything and I am truly grateful to be on the dA 24 hour popular tag along with you guys!
Ill get around to thanking you all when I get back on when I wake up!
Edit 2-- So... Saying thank you to each of you individually is taking a while ;w; even though I want to say it to everyone... Hmmm... I suppose I can say it here though! I know it isn't as personal but I want to thank each and everyone of you for the fav's and watches it really touches my heart! Sorry its not an individual thank you but at least it is the next best thing! ^_^
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Finally! Someone who understands. I always, ALWAYS, keep saying if you need to cry then cry. Nobody should ever be able to not let you. That's just wrong in so many different levels. You clearly understand that everyone and everything cries. Human, animal, living or dead etc. You have done beautifully writing this. Let it be heard to everyone to say cry. Cry all you need to. Never, EVER, hold the tears back. It will only cause more problems. Thank you for writing this. It is truly amazing. Again I say this; Cry all you need to. and don't ever hold the tears back.