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                        Up in the air                                 Back down














I throw my dreams                      But they never come              
When I throw everything I've got for the world to see it all ends up floating in space to be forgotten and dismissed.
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

 Hey there,

 

Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconpoeticalcondition: with the critique you requested.

 

This is a fantastic example of how just a few words can be used to say SO MUCH. The reason the brevity works so well is that it leaves room for the reader to bring their own interpretation. I think the way you structured this and the use of italics is a great touch.

 

I wouldn’t change a thing!

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Likoro Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This poem thought me a great lesson..... I WILL TIE UP ALL OF MY DREAMS!

thx curiously, you are a dream savior :D
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014
Haha anytime likoro ^_^
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howlingghostwolf Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Wow I love how this is written and the message behind it!
Awesome job ^-^
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Glad you liked it :meow: means a great deal to me ^_^
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howlingghostwolf Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
:meow: ^-^
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ChickenChaser2 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very, very heavy. XD Love it! 
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Why thank you! :D
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28spike Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Oh... doh... :iconohstopityouplz:
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