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Even though
So many smiles
Are because of him
Deep down inside
His face
Must have
Never really
Smiled
Perhaps in
His new stage
The audience
Can laugh and
Joke while
Robin can look
Back at the crowd
And grin
Robin Williams, was a very special actor to me, making me laugh in all his movies, especially flubber. It makes me sad to think he was this depressed in the end and it disheartens me greatly. He shall be missed by me as well as a lot of other people in the community. I just hope that he felt some joy in what he was doing because he means a lot and made my life more enjoyable with his comedy and personality. Farewell Robin and I shall cherish the good times you have given me.

Edit: Thank you for all the thoughts, and memories you have from this great man. I am putting this here to thank all of you and hope you have a wonderful week and happy thoughts :) :)
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This is a very beautiful poem. The emotion was beautifully captured and it was very well written. You have also managed to capture sadness and happiness combined in the words you chose. However, you poem does seem a little bit stiff. Perhaps try to get a more regular beat to the poems for a greater impact. This would improve the flow of the poem and make it easier to read. Other than that, there is nothing else I can say. Very well written and very nicely chosen phrasing. This gets a thumbs up from me. Well done for a a lovely poem.
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nekoshappiness33 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinucryplz: Beautiful.  Seriously.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Thank you very much for saying that :hug:
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nekoshappiness33 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinuhappycryplz:  Your very welcome!!  :iconinuilikeitplz:
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:meow:
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ClairsKiller Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gosh good job dude, this really has alot of meaning and made eme tear up a bit, very well done
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Thank you so much for the appreciation :hug:
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RaptorTheSylveon Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Artist
He was my favourite actor

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Goldendoctor Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
Big Hero 6 Baymax (There There) 
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
There there let me give you a hug :huggle:
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Clarity-Art Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
If you haven't watched Aladdin or Night at the Museum, you should.  Although those movies are the only ones I've seen him, he played his roles to their best and really found a place in my heart.  Rest in peace, Robin Williams, and keep entertaining us in the movies you made and in little messages from heaven.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Great message and I have seen them, they were amazing movies showcasing his wonderful talent. :hug:
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Clarity-Art Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Yes.
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Tairiku Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:iconallmytearsplz:.....I miss him so much, but it's touching to see this written about him. Makes me hope wherever he is he's bringing smiles to people's faces like he did for me all those years. So, Thank You So Much for making this and I hope very much that you're right, and no matter how brief, he knew some type of joy in life and how much he meant to so many of us.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
I am glad to have struck a special note with you as well as other people and thank you for the kind words :meow: :hug: and do not worry I am sure he was happy one point and now he will always be happy now :glomp:
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MissHollowDran Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
He was a very beautiful person
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
That he was :hug:
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ChocoLatte5 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Rest in peace, Robin Williams...
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:hug:
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TinyandHuge Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Beautiful. May he rest in peace...
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Yes may he smile down on us :hug:
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TinyandHuge Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
:)
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Taqresu650 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I miss him too.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
We all do but the memories shall be forever :hug:
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Taqresu650 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Indeed. Now whenever I play Jumanji, or watch any of his movies, or even play Kingdom Hearts, I'll remember him. Hug 
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
That's good to think of :huggle:
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Taqresu650 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yep. :D
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:)
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Luke-The-Spook Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
RIP Robin Williams. :iconcryplz: 
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Its ok :huggle: he is still smiling down on us :D
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Luke-The-Spook Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:) 
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Aankai-Rain Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow you take the words out of me 

I don't get that a lot
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
I am glad you like what I have written :hug:
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MysteryofKokoro Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very sweet!

With all of the artwork dedicated to Williams, it makes me feel bad for never hearing or knowing about him. Although, with the knowledge I now have about him, it does make me wonder what caused the depression in him...

May he rest peacefully.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
He was a very good man, I suppose it just got to him one day, and yes may he rest peacefully indeed :hug:
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Swifty-TheVagabond Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
He was a talented actor and comedian, I too will miss him.

Genie may now be free, but we'll all see him on his new stage when our time comes too. Something nice to look forward to in the far future.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
That is what I have been thinking as well :huggle: May we all be in his presence once again with time.
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A beautiful contribution.

Robin was one of my favourite actors from my childhood. :( I heard the news through a workmate, had to clarify the name, and she said it like I should have known already...

The news sunk in when a news report on tv announcemend his death, and I just felt... empty. :( He will be missed. 
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Hey it's all right, we will always have his greatest memories in our hearts... "Oh captain" and "Goodnight Vietnam" here have a hug :meow: :hug:
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3 Thank you for the hug.
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Of course :3 everyone could use a hug now and then :)
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
<3
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
^_^
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Chiolla Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Writer
Isn't it sad how much he was appreciated and liked and still was so sad? I will miss him so dearly, he was the most sympathetic actor i know
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Yes it is quite a bad thing to think of but hopefully he is making jokes in a better place now and finally smiling as he leaves with us all the good times we have had with him :hug:
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cool-ewan Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:noes:
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adscomics Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really lovely. Robin Williams will indeed be missed...
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
He will but let us not forget all the cherished moments we have :hug:
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adscomics Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed. He was a great man
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CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Most certainly :)
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