Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconcuriouslyalone: More from CuriouslyAlone


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
August 12
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
2,129
Favourites
284 (who?)
Comments
84
×
Even though
So many smiles
Are because of him
Deep down inside
His face
Must have
Never really
Smiled
Perhaps in
His new stage
The audience
Can laugh and
Joke while
Robin can look
Back at the crowd
And grin
Robin Williams, was a very special actor to me, making me laugh in all his movies, especially flubber. It makes me sad to think he was this depressed in the end and it disheartens me greatly. He shall be missed by me as well as a lot of other people in the community. I just hope that he felt some joy in what he was doing because he means a lot and made my life more enjoyable with his comedy and personality. Farewell Robin and I shall cherish the good times you have given me.

Edit: Thank you for all the thoughts, and memories you have from this great man. I am putting this here to thank all of you and hope you have a wonderful week and happy thoughts :) :)
Add a Comment:
 
:iconbooglebug28:
This is a very beautiful poem. The emotion was beautifully captured and it was very well written. You have also managed to capture sadness and happiness combined in the words you chose. However, you poem does seem a little bit stiff. Perhaps try to get a more regular beat to the poems for a greater impact. This would improve the flow of the poem and make it easier to read. Other than that, there is nothing else I can say. Very well written and very nicely chosen phrasing. This gets a thumbs up from me. Well done for a a lovely poem.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
21 out of 22 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconnekoshappiness33:
nekoshappiness33 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinucryplz: Beautiful.  Seriously.
Reply
:iconcuriouslyalone:
CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Thank you very much for saying that :hug:
Reply
:iconnekoshappiness33:
nekoshappiness33 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinuhappycryplz:  Your very welcome!!  :iconinuilikeitplz:
Reply
:iconcuriouslyalone:
CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:meow:
Reply
:iconclairskiller:
ClairsKiller Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gosh good job dude, this really has alot of meaning and made eme tear up a bit, very well done
Reply
:iconcuriouslyalone:
CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Thank you so much for the appreciation :hug:
Reply
:iconacuboidcurcle:
acuboidcurcle Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student Artist
He was my favourite actor

:iconcryforeverplz:
Reply
:iconcuriouslyalone:
CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
There there let me give you a hug :huggle:
Reply
:iconclarity-art:
Clarity-Art Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Student General Artist
If you haven't watched Aladdin or Night at the Museum, you should.  Although those movies are the only ones I've seen him, he played his roles to their best and really found a place in my heart.  Rest in peace, Robin Williams, and keep entertaining us in the movies you made and in little messages from heaven.
Reply
:iconcuriouslyalone:
CuriouslyAlone Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Great message and I have seen them, they were amazing movies showcasing his wonderful talent. :hug:
Reply
Add a Comment: