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Literature Text
Even though
So many smiles
Are because of him
Deep down inside
His face
Must have
Never really
Smiled
Perhaps in
His new stage
The audience
Can laugh and
Joke while
Robin can look
Back at the crowd
And grin
So many smiles
Are because of him
Deep down inside
His face
Must have
Never really
Smiled
Perhaps in
His new stage
The audience
Can laugh and
Joke while
Robin can look
Back at the crowd
And grin
Literature
It's okay to be different
Fitting in's a trap:
they put you inside the box,
and then close the lid.
Literature
Six Words for the Suffering
Pain ends, but you must not.
Literature
Fake
How are you?
I am fine, thank you.
Stop lying…
How was your weekend?
It was great, tons of fun!
Besides the nights I spent crying….
Are you sure you’re okay?
Yeah, of course I am fine.
No I’m not I am in so much pain….
Can you imagine being alone?
No, that would be horrible!
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Robin Williams, was a very special actor to me, making me laugh in all his movies, especially flubber. It makes me sad to think he was this depressed in the end and it disheartens me greatly. He shall be missed by me as well as a lot of other people in the community. I just hope that he felt some joy in what he was doing because he means a lot and made my life more enjoyable with his comedy and personality. Farewell Robin and I shall cherish the good times you have given me.
Edit: Thank you for all the thoughts, and memories you have from this great man. I am putting this here to thank all of you and hope you have a wonderful week and happy thoughts
Edit: Thank you for all the thoughts, and memories you have from this great man. I am putting this here to thank all of you and hope you have a wonderful week and happy thoughts
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Technique ImpactThis is a very beautiful poem. The emotion was beautifully captured and it was very well written. You have also managed to capture sadness and happiness combined in the words you chose. However, you poem does seem a little bit stiff. Perhaps try to get a more regular beat to the poems for a greater impact. This would improve the flow of the poem and make it easier to read. Other than that, there is nothing else I can say. Very well written and very nicely chosen phrasing. This gets a thumbs up from me. Well done for a a lovely poem.