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To make a person happy
Sometimes may require effort
Other times it can be simple
Being there for a disheartened soul
Consoling them through their grief
One does not need to strive far
To achieve what they want
In purifying a lost cause
You could even say
A act of smiling is all it takes
Making a person know you care about them
Realizing that they aren't alone in the world
They mean some significance to a human
simply smile
And you could make the earth a better place
For many people
When they need a friend most
Sometimes may require effort
Other times it can be simple
Being there for a disheartened soul
Consoling them through their grief
One does not need to strive far
To achieve what they want
In purifying a lost cause
You could even say
A act of smiling is all it takes
Making a person know you care about them
Realizing that they aren't alone in the world
They mean some significance to a human
simply smile
And you could make the earth a better place
For many people
When they need a friend most
Hello all! A person aka 
did a nice deed so I wanted her to give me an idea to write a poem about and here it is thank you!
did a nice deed so I wanted her to give me an idea to write a poem about and here it is thank you! © 2014 - 2024 CuriouslyAlone
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactLove this message. It breathes of kindness and the empathetic relation of all human kind. It is optimistic in its presentation and shows that it was intended for a single person.
Although this is not an original idea, and many phrases are not original the technique in expressing them is. I felt like this was a small story instead of a poem. Either way I liked it.
Sometimes smiling can make a difference. I felt as though more could have been done though. I felt like a descriptive moment was missing. Perhaps the best way to describe this was it felt like a radio commercial. I could hear it and liked it but couldn't' see it.
Despite the lack of visualization I really enjoyed this poem.