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The Road

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     A      a     road
     So           simple
     From  s     afar
     Look   i     closer
     Gain   n    vision
     See   g     past
Through   l     ones
     Own   e     illusions
     Two         paths
     Two    p    families
     Two    a    fathers
     Two    t    deaths
     Two    h    legacies
     Two         futures
     Two    b    choices
     Two    u    decisions
     Two    t     realities
     Two          lives
 Hidden    t     truth
    With    h    this
  Simple    e    road

    Once         Fragmented

    Life's     f    desires
Everything  o   dreamed
Instantly    r    destroyed
 Chosen     k    suffering
  Saving          grace
Defiantly   d     placed
   Minds     i     hesitance
      You    v    must
      Pick     i    one
      In      d     this
     Game   e    we
     Call      s    life
A double meaning poem, I decided to try out! (Just for clarification the letters you see in the middle make up a poem, as well as reading from side to side excluding the middle letters you see!). I tried to describe what it is like to go on a singular road path and how difficult it can be once it diverges! Some questions for those who want to critique; do I do a good job at trying to incorporate two meanings of the same topic? Is it to complex or complicated? And just overall what you think of it. As always thank you for taking the time in viewing what I have to offer the community! :D
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FieryDownpour479's avatar
I think it's a super awesome poem! And the visual you added to it makes it even better!